Thursday, 13 October 2016

Holiday Postcard

My Reflection
This week for writing I had to write a postcard to Mrs P about my holiday.
This is mine I hope u enjoy.


Mrs P said...

I love going to Papamoa it is such a lovely beach but I don't think I would be as brave as you and go in the water.

Next time Katie remember to capital letters for place names.

Myra said...

Hi Katie
Well done I enjoyed reading your postcard I think you did a really good job on adding good punctuation like exclamation mark. Maybe next time you could read your sentences so they make sense.