Monday, 30 May 2016

100 Word Challenge #1

100 Word Challenge

It all started with me searching for a seat because my legs were moaning, saying they were tired after a long day of walking.  Finally found a bench, but someone was sitting on it reading.

(30 minutes later) OMG! The man was still sitting there.
Hang on... I saw someone else on it, he was bronze and looked really fake,he wore a top hat and looked very smart. I was guessing someone made a statue and put it there.

I was over waiting, my moaning legs were now screaming at me. I decided it was time to go home!

The End!

Thursday, 26 May 2016

Autumn Poem

My Reflection
Walt : use a range of language features like personification and onomatopoeia to enhance my writing.

I was able to use personification in my writing.  I chose some animals or objects related to autumn and then I gave the human qualities.
Next time  I will try to think of more ideas instead of doing leaves in most sentences.  I will also try to include personification in other writing not just poems.