My Reflection
Walt : use a range of language features like personification and onomatopoeia to enhance my writing.
I was able to use personification in my writing. I chose some animals or objects related to autumn and then I gave the human qualities.
Next time I will try to think of more ideas instead of doing leaves in most sentences. I will also try to include personification in other writing not just poems.
1 comment:
Great personification writing Katie. I liked the way your took your time to re-craft your writing to make sure your ideas were not repeated. Sometimes it can be quite tricky but the end result is an improved piece of writing. Well done.
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