Tuesday, 13 September 2016

Camp Merc Acrostic Poem

Carefully abseiling with courage
Adventurous  outdoor activities with friends
Memories to look back at
Perfect teamwork games

My Marvelous Dad came along to help
Exciting energetic activities
Recreational centre of fun pushing you over your comfort zone
Competing for immunity from Jessie’s dreaded fitness.

2 terrific nights at Camp Merc
0 people making noise the second night
1 year 6 farewell
6 scrumptious meals a day
By Katie, 2016




My Reflection
Walt: write a thank you acrostic poem

I was able to write a detailed acrostic poem about camp merc.
Next time I will make my acrostic poem more detailed with some more interesting words.

2 comments:

Seth said...

Hello Katie You have done some good work you have used good detail in your sentences and explaining what happened at camp like your showing the reader your view of what camp was like. Another thing is how you described your personal experience E.g what activities you did including Abseiling,rock climbing,giants ladder and more.

My wish for you is try to make your sentences more personal meaning use words that are unique and ideas that other people haven't written in their acrostic poem's

I hope my feedback has improved your work and keep doing a great job
Seth.H

Qing Qing said...

Hi Katie I really like your poem maybe next time you should put n y words

But good job keep up the great work!
(love your poem though)
-Qing Qing